Finally!
Thank you for waiting. I hope that this page isn't too disappointing.
So, my thoughts on it:
First, I hate panel 3. Truly hate it. I think I drew that on a bad day or something. I'll come to fix these first pages in the near future, though. :)
Second, I forgot to add a panel to show the building they were entering. I'll show you in the next pages.
I hope that at least it's clear what's going on, and that the dialog's not too bad. I had to shorten this because I didn't have enough space.
One of the reasons this took me so long was that I couldn't concentrate on drawing it. I was in a complicated mood. I'd try to get to draw the page but then would become distracted with something else. Another reason was my discontent with the story. So I made some important changes to it, after discussing it with friends and doing some research. So know that the story was going to take place in an orphanage, but not anymore. Thus, the 'About' page has been updated.
Thank you for reading! To the 8+ fans, you deserve a gift. ^_^
Comments ...
Author Notes
Arwym Starlight
Thank you for waiting. I hope that this page isn't too disappointing.
So, my thoughts on it:
First, I hate panel 3. Truly hate it. I think I drew that on a bad day or something. I'll come to fix these first pages in the near future, though. :)
Second, I forgot to add a panel to show the building they were entering. I'll show you in the next pages.
I hope that at least it's clear what's going on, and that the dialog's not too bad. I had to shorten this because I didn't have enough space.
One of the reasons this took me so long was that I couldn't concentrate on drawing it. I was in a complicated mood. I'd try to get to draw the page but then would become distracted with something else. Another reason was my discontent with the story. So I made some important changes to it, after discussing it with friends and doing some research. So know that the story was going to take place in an orphanage, but not anymore. Thus, the 'About' page has been updated.
Thank you for reading! To the 8+ fans, you deserve a gift. ^_^
Arwym Starlight
Don't forget to vote for TDA. :) The links are at the bottom of this page. Thank you! I'll put a new incentive this next week. ^_^
Arwym Starlight
Discussion
selenaloong
nice~
Arwym Starlight
Thank you very much for faving TDA, and for the nice comment. ^_^ I truly appreciate it.
aeondesires
Pretty. The flow of the speech is great!
RimiRin
What a pretty artwork you have there!
Arwym Starlight
Hehe, thanks, RimiRin. :)
I hope I can update very soon. :D
By the way, I like your comic so far. I was reading it just now!